Category: Writers Block
You'll never see
The hidden tears
That I have shed through all the fear
All the fear you put me through
I never thought this would be you
You promised me
That you would change
I was wrong to think
That it wasn't strange
I guess I was held
Under your spell
And you must have thought
I was doing well
But these tears you'll never see
Because they are inside of me
My heart cries night and day
Hoping that you'll come my way
But I don't know why.
I say this with a sigh
Because I should have known
You would leave me all alone
That's sooo sad. It's really good.
i like it kimmy
Awww man this makes me sad. But you#Re a good writer!! *smiles*
how do u manage every time to get the mood rite on the hed? well done u keep it up daria! x
I love this poem Daria. It captures the feeling perfectly and it's sad. You're a great writer Daria, and you need to keep on writing girl. hugs.
Thank yall so much.
Thanks so much guys, and I will keep this up.
awww, keep it up girl!
teach me how to write good poems in English, Daria. Please. Lol
good job, well done.